Journal Entry

I finally did it! I spent all day yesterday writing my 1st draft analytical essay on Human and Sex Trafficking. Then today I had a friend proofread it for me. She made a few suggestions.... I took all suggestions made into consideration and then wrote my final draft. I am happy with the outcome on it. Hopefully I didn't cross the line into this essay being a persuasive paper. That was hard to do on this topic. I felt it was a very fine line that was being walked. We'll see what my instructor, Sylvia says in class about it. Hopefully she thinks it is good.