Journal Entry

I just finished my first draft of my Narrative/ Descriptive Essay, but now I have to figure out how to make it shorter! I know it is only suppose to be 5 paragraphs, but that is really hard to do. Right now it is about 2 1/2 pages. Hmmm.... not sure what to do. I think I will walk away from it for tonight and go back to it tomorrow. See if that helps. And I sent it to a friend... hopefully she can help me out!